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Wednesday, January 17, 2007

MINUTE MEN, SCRIPT IN PROGRESS

READ THE 7 PAGES OF COMPLETED SCRIPT HERE:
http://docs.google.com/View?docid=d9p72cq_8gn2sqz&revision=_published


MINUTE MEN

by "GARROLOUS" GREGORY GIORDANO & "EXTATIC" ETHAN SLAYTON

Issue One


Page One

Panel One-
Splash/Title page.

A Father and son look out over the deck of some massive ship that's giving tours along the Atlantic sea coast. We see a few other passengers but the main POV is a hypothetical viewer behind the Father and Son, past them and out to sea where a great metllic, toy-top shaped ,floating dirrigible sits a few hundred yards off the Atlantic Coast. The Father is pointing out towards the massive object and smiling as he tells his sone what the thing is. THe Father is looking out where he is pointing. The son is looking up at his Dad with disbelief and awe. He's wearing a little irish mans cap and thick knitted sweater. The Father is a hard working class man.

Dad- " Look out there son! You see that? That's the mighty "Iron Dreidle" we've been hearing so much about in the newspapers lately!"

Son- "Hey, Holy Cow, Pop! Ain't that the new headquarters of those super heroes...? You know....The MINUTE MEN?"
*Greg-I figure we could put the words "minutemen" into huge type with our credits underneath it, like they did in the olden Golden days!


Dad- " You're one hundred percent right on about that,son!


PAGE TWO-

PANEL ONE

We have switched to the interior of the "Iron Dreidle" where we are led into the super secret meeting room of the MINUTE MEN! BLUE SHIELD is standing in front of a number of the minute men; like in a briefing room. She is using a pointer on a massive computer screen and talking about how to fortify a perimeter or some such non sense that only makes sense to her. Everyone else is about as bored as they possibly can be...except for ATOMIC WIZARD. He is standing close by, watching the briefing intently. Others in the room; GREEN GOLEM, WHIZ-BANG, JACK VICTORY, SKORCHER, JOUSTER and TALON. TALON is looking like he just got slapped awake as he stammers out an answer to a question from BLUE SHIELD.


Dad- (Off panel) "...And I'll betchoo they're in thier hideout planning a raid on those Ratzi scum RIGHT at this VERY moment!!"


BLUE SHIELD- "...and this would allow for the two point gaurds to make a clean sweep of the generator rooms in complete silence. However, if the silence is broken and the Nazi gaurds alerted,...what happens next?....anybody...?

Anybody?...Talon! How about you! C'mon, Man! You're very LIFE could depend on this!!"


TALON- "Huh?...W..well, BLUE SHIELD, after that,..ummm...I guess we could...er...that is..."


INSERT PANEL for pg 2-

Small circular corner in the lower right corner of the page shows a shocked, mouth agape BLUE SHIELD as her briefing is interuppted bya screaming alarm.


SFX- BRRREEEE!!BRRRREEEEE!!BRRRRRREEEEEEEEE!!

BLUE SHIELD- "Dammit! Everybody! To the Monitor room!"

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